Mission Statement

    A couple of weeks ago in my NxLevel class we were working on writing our mission statements.  A mission statement is supposed to be one sentence that embodies everything that your business strives to become.  I've been working on my mission statement for a while now because it's just so important.  I want my customers and employees to be able look at it and really get what I'm trying to accomplish.  I've been playing around with different words and this is what I have so far:

    Powder Boutique's mission is to become a shopping destination that allows women to purchase     practical, functional, and high-quality clothing in a comfortable and inviting atmosphere.

    I don't know... I keep changing my mind.  Some days I like it, other days I don't.  I think my biggest problem with it is the word "allows."  It just doesn't seem to fit. 

    I'll keep working on it until I get it right, and of course I'll update it here.  Does anyone have any suggestions?

Comments

[Aileen]

Powder Boutique's mission is to become a shopping destination where women purchase practical, functional, and high-quality clothing in a comfortable and inviting atmosphere.

[Powder Boutique]

Ah- that flows a lot better. Thanks, Aileen!